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Illogical modifiers |
REMEMBER: |
An introductory verbal modifier should immediately precede the noun which it
modifies.
Avoid using a noun immediately after an introductory verbal phrase which may
not be logically modified by the phrase.
Avoid using a passive construction after an introductory verbal modifier. |
Check these examples: |
EXAMPLE: |
Incorrect: |
After graduating from City College, Professor Rowland Moore's studies were
continued at State University where he received his Ph.D. in English. |
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Correct: |
After graduating from City College, Professor
Rowland Moore continued his
studies at State University where he received his Ph.D. in English. |
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