LEVEL 5

It was a day like everyday. I woke up early and dressed to go to work. When I was about to leave, the phone rang. I picked it up and at the other end was a voice who said that my two children were kidnapped. I suddenly felt my blood run cold as the voice told me that he wanted £10,000,000 on an account (l am a rich woman who had received her money from a rich grandmother). He said that he would call me back at work in an hour.
When I hang up, I reached my ex-husband who confirmed that our children weren't in their bed this morning.
Just on time, the man phoned again and gave me more information: the account number, the adress of the bank. He threatened me not to tell the police or I would never see my children again. Fortunately, I had a good friend at the police station. I told him that the man wanted to meet me at the parc near my work. By the time I arrived there, the man was under arrest with many policemen around him. Anxiously, I looked everywhere to see my children. I was astonished when I saw them standing there!

CONTENT
Very well told story.
ACCURACY
Minimal errors - very good use of tenses.
RANGE
Wide range of structure and vocabulary.
ORGANISATION AND COHESION
Very well developed storyline.
APPROPRIACY OF REGISTER AND FORMAT
Excellent.
TARGET READER
Would enjoy the story.

LEVEL 4

Dear Club Comraidde
I am writing to suggest two films to the next years festival program.
My first suggestion called "Bavalona" The film set in Spain and there are no famouse stars in it. It's a film about two male cousins who grew up together disliking each other. Now in them twenties they meet up again. One cousin works for a company in Barcelona, the other one works for the US Navy. The film is about how they get on with each other and about the pro- and anti American attitude. The most I like about this film is that it's full of words and without violence and anything shocking.
My second suggestion called "Before Sunrise" It's an American film made in Vienna in 1993. It about two young students, an American and a French one who meet in Vienna and spend a weekend together. The boy is travelling around the world and the girs is going to visit her grandmother. During the weekend they fell in love with each other, but they have to continoue them separate ways. It's a film full of romance and
deep philosophical (issuose) issouse.
I hope yourd liked my report. If you have any more question, please let me know.
Yours sciencfully

CONTENT
All necessary information covered.
ACCURACY
Generally accurate. Some errors due to ambition.
RANGE
Very good.
ORGANISATION AND COHESION
Good.
APPROPRIACY OF REGISTER AND FORMAT
Very appropriate on the whole..
TARGET READER
Would be fully informed.

LEVEL 3

I am writing in order to inform you about some change which I recodnised during the my last trip to Lampton.
The arrival to Lampton by train has been canceled. ABC Coacher service would be recommended. Not only was the Hotel Astrid closed last year, but there is also no discount for students at Bay Hotel Royal. However, the Riverside Hotel which we stayed, was great. Because it was very comfortable. In adition that, there was a discount for students.
The Trinity boat trips was absolutely stunning, but the departure had been changed. Now the new departure was at King's Bridge. In adition to painting and furniture at Lampton Castle, there was a new collection of musical instruments which was great.
I hope, the information which I corrected will be useful for you. In case If you like to send the free copy of the nex edition of the guide book, my adres is at the and of the letter.
Yours faithfully

CONTENT
All points covered.
ACCURACY
A number of non-impeding spelling and tense errors.
RANGE
Some attempt at range.
ORGANISATION AND COHESION
Adequately organised. Clear attempt at paragraphing.
APPROPRIACY OF REGISTER AND FORMAT
Appropriate.
TARGET READER
Would be able to amend the guide-book.

LEVEL 2

The old man and The Sea
think about story it happens in one place, between human and animal, and you can not put it down until read through all of it. it is class "The Old Man and the Sea"
A old man whose life is fishing starts sailing to the sea which has been known very well by him this all passed in this endless sea almost alone. He had got spa realitionship with this wildwod. In this tory the old man sett off his ratin journey to get by when he got something on his tuckle he starts a very exciting but tiring adventure. Now the fish is queit bigger than it was. It is huge sword fish. They are in the sea alone.
All the story takes place between them in the sea and their fightine between them, against the cold, sun, lack of food, and sharz. It is quiet interesting.
End of story the old man managed to get back with sword fish. He has won again and next day he will be in the sea again.

CONTENT
Reasonable achievement of task.
ACCURACY
A number of distracting errors.
RANGE
Attempt at range.
ORGANISATION AND COHESION
Adequately organised.
APPROPRIACY OF REGISTER AND FORMAT
Appropriate.
TARGET READER
Would need patience to try to understand the writer's point of view.

LEVEL 1

"What can people do to ......?" Different people have a diferent life stile. Everybody like something diferent because we are not a same. Somebody is very layzi and have a unhealthy lifestile eat lot of fatnes, sviets and chachecs. Sleap, whatch televizion and dont do nothing all day. But we are head definitly to live much healthy life than this?
Lot of vegetables and fuits is very good for healt and nice boody meat is very important to! Food have a lot of thinks with are very important for over boody and health. Some fitness is also easfulle if you eat healthy food. We nead to keep fit buy doing some sport or tyme.
Raning in nature and take a long breth is also very easfulle.
Wake up morning and go raning. Muve a lot and dont spend your all day in your flat to do nothing!
Do something to make you fit and healthy. It is lot of to do. Don't be layzi and go to gym.
This is my advice.

CONTENT
Reasonable attempt at task.
ACCURACY
Little evidence of control.
RANGE
Some attempt at range.
ORGANISATION AND COHESION
Adequately organised.
APPROPRIACY OF REGISTER AND FORMAT
Reasonable attempt.
TARGET READER
Negative effect because of frequent errors.

Please, remember that all of the evaluation comments above should be interpreted at FCE level.